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"Time's passing by
like a river.
Flowing continuing
leaving precious treasures
called memories"
The first one of a new line of motives for a calendar project.
Rendering: Poser Pro 2012
Postwork: Photoshop
Full Time: ~ 30 h
Render Time: ~ 25 h
Related Work:
like a river.
Flowing continuing
leaving precious treasures
called memories"
The first one of a new line of motives for a calendar project.
Rendering: Poser Pro 2012
Postwork: Photoshop
Full Time: ~ 30 h
Render Time: ~ 25 h
Related Work:
Image size
2000x1218px 1.24 MB
© 2012 - 2024 Ealaine
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I really like the composition and story being told by this image 
It's really pretty, and moving as well. You are getting so good at telling stories within your pieces 
One thing I noticed is the veil/white sheet just sort of ends at her shoulders, making it seem a bit off with the rest of the piece. Possibly making it end a bit sooner, or continue down the whole way but gradually get more transparent will help the composition better!
I would almost say, a bit of tweaking could work with the camera for "the rule of thirds" it's a technique photographers use, but 3D artists can use as well for making their compositions stand out a bit. That is to not have anything of focal point dead centre in the frame, usually makes it seem a little less compelling and a bit boring as it's dead centre. What you could try is giving us a bit to look at on the left side, and widening the shot a bit so the character and her 'reflections' are more to the right, rather then center/right. Another idea might be do distance it so the character in the middle falls to the left, with her 'reflections' to the right.
Again your technique, the models, etc everything looks really nice. I already told you about the watermark issue so I won't bring that up
The lettering though..or possibly just the style of font you used is really hard to read though. I can barely tell what it reads.
Keep up the awesome work
love seeing your work!
It's really pretty, and moving as well. You are getting so good at telling stories within your pieces One thing I noticed is the veil/white sheet just sort of ends at her shoulders, making it seem a bit off with the rest of the piece. Possibly making it end a bit sooner, or continue down the whole way but gradually get more transparent will help the composition better!
I would almost say, a bit of tweaking could work with the camera for "the rule of thirds" it's a technique photographers use, but 3D artists can use as well for making their compositions stand out a bit. That is to not have anything of focal point dead centre in the frame, usually makes it seem a little less compelling and a bit boring as it's dead centre. What you could try is giving us a bit to look at on the left side, and widening the shot a bit so the character and her 'reflections' are more to the right, rather then center/right. Another idea might be do distance it so the character in the middle falls to the left, with her 'reflections' to the right.
Again your technique, the models, etc everything looks really nice. I already told you about the watermark issue so I won't bring that up
The lettering though..or possibly just the style of font you used is really hard to read though. I can barely tell what it reads.Keep up the awesome work
love seeing your work!